Okay, so my comment from last week didn’t seem to make it here. I’m doing it again, hoping it didn’t contain anything offending.
Again, Jonathan Silver’s mysterious smile. Does he see something in our hero that he has in common with him?
Also, Snowfall’s body language is very well done. I like her more and more. (And Marc’s reaction is spot on sensitive. See, Quarterback? That’s how a good guy does it. Also, see, Princess Paragon?)
And yeah, exposition to come about our new beloved secondary character! (That’s assuming next page doesn’t skip back to the Royal Guard or Oberon and when we get back again to SB and SF they’re going out of the coffee place and he’s saying something to the tune of, “Yeah, I can totally understand what you went through there. I’m here for you if you need me, but maybe you might want to ask someone who knows more about this kind of thing? I might be able to ask people around me…”)
Wait, I forgot something. I meant to mention that by my reckoning, the backgrounds look slightly too blurry in this page. That level of blur was all right earlier from a distance, and when action and tension were high during the almost-showdown with Sentry 7, but right now I don’t feel it’s appropriate and I’d like it slightly less blurry.
(Of course, that’s just my opinion and you’re welcome to ignore it, particularly as no one else has commented on it.)
OK. That was very cool.
Ice Cool?
“Iced coffee” hahaha
Maybe Jonathon admires your stance on how supers should act?
Okay, so my comment from last week didn’t seem to make it here. I’m doing it again, hoping it didn’t contain anything offending.
Again, Jonathan Silver’s mysterious smile. Does he see something in our hero that he has in common with him?
Also, Snowfall’s body language is very well done. I like her more and more. (And Marc’s reaction is spot on sensitive. See, Quarterback? That’s how a good guy does it. Also, see, Princess Paragon?)
And yeah, exposition to come about our new beloved secondary character! (That’s assuming next page doesn’t skip back to the Royal Guard or Oberon and when we get back again to SB and SF they’re going out of the coffee place and he’s saying something to the tune of, “Yeah, I can totally understand what you went through there. I’m here for you if you need me, but maybe you might want to ask someone who knows more about this kind of thing? I might be able to ask people around me…”)
Wait, I forgot something. I meant to mention that by my reckoning, the backgrounds look slightly too blurry in this page. That level of blur was all right earlier from a distance, and when action and tension were high during the almost-showdown with Sentry 7, but right now I don’t feel it’s appropriate and I’d like it slightly less blurry.
(Of course, that’s just my opinion and you’re welcome to ignore it, particularly as no one else has commented on it.)