All right, so Marc is more juvenile than I gave him credit for. Hey, guy has to have a few flaws, right? His smiling-yet-sorry placatory expression is perfect.
And yeah, exploration in superhero universes can be a chancy activity.
If I may, three remarks:
– In panel four, Snowfall says “the environment en natrual processes” : I think that should be “natural” instead of “natrual”.
– In panel five, she says “chasing some anomolous readings” : I think that should be “anomalous” instead of “anomolous”.
– Is the East Arctic plateau a thing in the Macroverse? In our world, the Arctic is just ice floe and icebergs, with no land whatsoever. Also, there is apparently an East Antarctic plateau.
FIXED ’em all, chum! I appreciate you keepin’ me right, with no spell-check built into my art program and me being as scatterbrained as I generally am when I’m tryin’ to get the pages finished I just dropped the ball – the East Antarctic plateau is where it’s at, I had done all my research and then just typed it up a little faster and missed the Ant part hahah need to get in the habit of proofreading my own stuff
By the way, dear fellow readers, I had missed the last page of dialogue between Vic and Noori, two pages back. In case someone else missed it, you can go back and enlighten yourselves. It’s between the Merry Christmas page and the beginning of this scene.
I’m not sure how to go about fixing this as an error, chum – it doesn’t seem to happen for me on any of my devices, I had a cheeky check on my work computers too and they seem to work just fine – I’ll keep researching when I’m able to see if I can identify the issue though
Hmmm. Was Mom pregnant with Snowfall at this point, I wonder? In utero possession is a nasty concept.
All right, so Marc is more juvenile than I gave him credit for. Hey, guy has to have a few flaws, right? His smiling-yet-sorry placatory expression is perfect.
And yeah, exploration in superhero universes can be a chancy activity.
If I may, three remarks:
– In panel four, Snowfall says “the environment en natrual processes” : I think that should be “natural” instead of “natrual”.
– In panel five, she says “chasing some anomolous readings” : I think that should be “anomalous” instead of “anomolous”.
– Is the East Arctic plateau a thing in the Macroverse? In our world, the Arctic is just ice floe and icebergs, with no land whatsoever. Also, there is apparently an East Antarctic plateau.
As usual, make of them what you will.
FIXED ’em all, chum! I appreciate you keepin’ me right, with no spell-check built into my art program and me being as scatterbrained as I generally am when I’m tryin’ to get the pages finished I just dropped the ball – the East Antarctic plateau is where it’s at, I had done all my research and then just typed it up a little faster and missed the Ant part hahah need to get in the habit of proofreading my own stuff
By the way, dear fellow readers, I had missed the last page of dialogue between Vic and Noori, two pages back. In case someone else missed it, you can go back and enlighten yourselves. It’s between the Merry Christmas page and the beginning of this scene.
“The [s]dwarves[/s] [b]scientists[/b] dug too greedily and too deep.”
Heh.
What do we think possessed , genetically altered or hosting a creature of some kind ?
Site is still doing the ‘doesn’t display latest page on the main page’ thing, just a heads up.
Site is still doing the ‘don’t show latest page on main page’ thing, just a heads up
I’m not sure how to go about fixing this as an error, chum – it doesn’t seem to happen for me on any of my devices, I had a cheeky check on my work computers too and they seem to work just fine – I’ll keep researching when I’m able to see if I can identify the issue though