Shifting Paradigms
on May 4, 2020
at 5:00 pm
Chapter: Volume 2 - Guarded
Characters: Bulldog, Celtica, Cry, Dragonshard, Marc Walker, Royal Guard, Shift, Silverback, The Hood
Location: S.I.D.H.E headquarters, Scotland
Silverback
A Superhero webcomic
well, change almost always is an herald of conflict, or vice versa.
change? conflict? in THIS comic? there is plenty of both to come! hahah
Welcome to May! I hope your shoulder is continuing to heal.
I found a couple typos on this page… do you have a way I can send them to you privately, rather than posting here?
I think Shift has TWO superpowers. The first is the ability to bodily flow into/around/within physical areas and barriers, much as an octopus can, to reach/support/restrain/block wherever needed. The second is to do the same through oral exposition! I’ve known college professors – and at least one employer – who also have this second superpower. It also tends to make me wonder what they’re NOT saying.
Also – to everyone else reading – I know I’m not the only one enjoying this story! Seriously folks, giving a buck a month through Patreon isn’t that much to show appreciation for the time and talent being shared with us here, but can really encourage the artist if enough people do it. Please help set a good example for everyone else!
thanks chum! yeah, the old shoulder is continuin’ to heal, had a minor complication with it but still better than it had previously been – thanks for the support!
for contact, either through the Silverback facebook page (https://www.facebook.com/Silverbackcomic/) or just through here, I don’t mind people knowin’ that if I’ve made a mistake, but I thoroughly appreciate havin’ you out there to keep me honest!
and who knows…maybe Shift has more than two, but you’ll need to keep readin to find out! hahah
and lastly, thank you so much for the backing on patreon! such a star!
OK, I’ll put these here so you can delete the post afterward if you want.
Panel 1:
bubble 3 – interference not interferrence
bubble 5 – world’s not worlds (unless multiple planets are being spoken of here, in which case it should be worlds’ )
bubble 6 – corps not corp, implemented not implimented
Panel 4:
bubble 2 – supermanufactured, not supermanufactuered
You used a couple expressions that seemed a bit awkward to me (“without of” and “outwith”) so I looked them up. I found that while they may not be commonly used or heard in the US, they are perfectly acceptable in Scotland – which just happens to be in the neighborhood of our impromptu lecture, here.
Much love, chum! ill get the changes made and update the page – thanks for keepin’ me honest again, hopefully I can start pickin’ up on these myself (it might help if i actually scripted and spellchecked the pages hahah) and yeah, I assume there’ll be little turns of phrase/colloquialisms that might sound out of place to anyone not based in my neck of the woods, though I’m keepin’ doric out of it for now hahah
Have you considered posting each page (or at least the dialog) one or two days early on your Patreon for members’ eyes only? That would allow for a review and edit (if needed) before the page goes public to everyone else. It would also be a nice bonus for your supporters.
Y’know, I have thought about it – It’s actually a plan I’m looking into but I’d want to have a few pages in the bank to try’n get a little ahead of myself to make sure I don’t fall behind with any updates – it’s achievable, but it’ll take some planning in advance, but it IS on the agenda!